All Comments on 'Stable Boy Ch. 13'

thanks.

I love this story and hope this isn't the end. Amanda needs to be punished and would love to see that happen

For a very good read!

Loved the story and look forward to more of Your works

How about a rodeo, with Amanda being let out of the stall and Celia, riding on Jim's back, ropes and hog-ties her, then finger-fucks her fore and aft? Then Amy and Chocolate get a chance, followed by Zara and Kathy. Best time wins, and, as the prize, ol' Amanda is their slave for 48 hours. More, Grandmistress Lisa Jones! The race lagged at first, but a strong finish wins.

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Very good story line, but I hope this isn't the end.

Brought back memories of Ann Rice (A. N. Roquelaure) Beauty trilogy. Wonderful pacing, within and between chapters. Certainly worth a second read.

have them continue, but in the adult riding time he has to be completely naked tend ing to the horses and clientele, and she shows him off to all her friends and relatives

I enjoyed this story very much.

The characters were well drawn and the pace varied well throughout the story.

The erotic scenes were exactly that without being too contrived.

Good work.

CB

I'm commenting about the series, not just this chapter.

I have some trouble believing that there are not more comments. This is one of the best short stories I have read here or on any web site. Excellent writing!

I really loved this, both for the kink and the emotion

Simply an amazing story and could not have been better written.

That was just great, really enjoyed it

To be frank, I am looking for LOVE not porn so when I read excerpts from a few chapters, I was turned off. Yet what I read haunted me because it captured some of my essence and empathy. I had to come back and read it all. I am not submissive, I was involuntarily conditioned (sans sex) to be a pony boy although when she wasn't riding me she was a pony girl along side me. I lost my non-consensual Mistress to a car accident. After the shock, I spent the rest of my life trying to find a lady, a lover, a wife and a Mistress in one woman. I am still haunted and still searching. I like the redemption in the end of this story and wish it were me. How the Authoress (?) captured my soul, well I don't know. It is like how I hated my Mistress at first then fell in love with her. At the encouraging of Soforia and HypnoGoddess, I submitted my story "Antoinette" to another archive dedicated to mind control. It was a love story at the time others were being posted. I may remove it soon though because the site is now lost its way and pandering to baser, perverted instincts with little or no love. -Rick

A love story. By turns erotic, arousing and charming, with a little cruelty thrown in for good measure. One of the best BDSM tales I've read on Literotica, or any were else.

Many thanks to MissLisaJones and please can we have some more :)

Phil

Great story and very well written. I agree with Nick's comment - one of the best on the site.

Superb story. It is so nice to read an erotic story that is not crude porn

All the best ingredients, cfnm, Ds, bdsm, pony play, romance and most of all good storytelling. This is a well written erotic romp. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

L O R

stayed up well past my bedtime to finish reading this series. I loved how their relationship developed. I didn't need the girls in it but wish there was a bonus chapter on kathy's new relationship. A stellar effort.

Thanks for the great story. Quite the interesting ending. I liked every chapter especially the chapters after they got together.

Very enjoyable, what can I say...I'm a sucker for bdsm with love and romance.

I'm a 71 yr old hard faced ex merchant seamanb and taxi driver. I thought i was a hard man, but i couldn't stop reading this story, and i cried at the endddddd!!!!

I'm quite impressed how you managed to develope the characters in this story. Initially I thought this one would be more about the fetish/sex aspect of your works, with the strong focus on humiliation by Amanda in the beginning but the blossoming relationship between Jim and Celia went way beyond that. I even teared up a bit at the end.

Every chapter you ask yourself in which directing the story is going. Keeping the reader excited and eager for more isn't an easy task but you always achieve this.

On a side note, I think Amanda and Kathy+Zara would have made for some great stories as well. In my opinion you're one of the best authors on this side.

This was a wonderful story; thank you so much for writing it!

The end saves the whole story, thanks for sharing.