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estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Sweet

A genuinely sweet story. Good work. Just needs a wee copy edit and it would be perfect. As a storyteller, you really shine; there's no need for you to get enmeshed in mechanicals. Get a copy editor, and write more.

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It might look like I came late to writing, but in fact I have been scribbling (and typing!) for a long time now. I've just been reluctant to post any. I began posting my non-sexual stories on my blog site,and this led to me taking the plunge and revealing the darker side of my...

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