All Comments on 'Star Wars: The Legion Saga'

I loved your story even though you left a couple of characters out. The plot was well developed and paced like a good novel. You should do other adaptations.

But good job. I haven't seen all the parts together in one place like this.

Holy crap! This story aroused me! I only wish there was an epilogue...

This perfectly combined everything I love about Star Wars and porn! Very vivid and well-written!

Toooooooo Goooooooood

Schwing! As Wayne and Garth would say. This story was probably better than the original and could definitely be a xxx porn parody.

Lots of spelling errors, that took away from a great story.

I loved your alternative Star Wars universe.

You are a fucking genious.

This story is so full of references from the original movies, mixed toghether in a fantastic way.

I read the whole story in 24 hours, but it was a well-spent time.

I expecially appreciated the lesbian royal bath, the incest scenes and the Wampa doing Aayla.

The tentacle rape of the twi'lek girls and ventress was interesting too.

The evangelic reference is a good idea, too (I am an atheist ^_^)

Best sentence: "Anakin smiled in understanding. He had won. In the end it had been his sex appeal that had given him victory. Not the clones, not even the force....but his cock."

I just don't like the death of Aayla... but in a distopic version of the Star Wars Universe where not one, but at least three planet were destroyed (i lost count), included the most inhabitated planet of the galaxy, it was adequate.

The fact that Anakin succeeded to put his semen in his daughter's body means that a new generation of vergences will rise? XD

Really, you have done a very good job. ^_^

Love what you were trying to do but kind of weird. I mean come on, Anakin raping Padme? Really? He would never do that unless he was forced to so in order to save her. And Anakin and Luke double teaming Leia? Seriously? Still really good though. 9 out of 10. Keep up the good work.

IT'S NOT TRUE that a man would eat a pussy in "an almost vicious way" and that this would be "less about pleasure and more about power"!I don't know where did you get such a FOOLISH THING?!A LOT OF MEN eat pussy in A PERFECT NORMAL WAY and this way HAS EVERYTHING TO DO WITH PLEASURE and not with power!Eirtae was eating Padme's pussy like this NOT BECAUSE SHE WAS SUCKING IT LIKE A MAN,but BECAUSE SHE LOVED TO HAVE POWER OVER HER QUEEN!