All Comments on 'Starlit Night'

by SweetMystery

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hairball18hairball18over 13 years ago
wow

Can I sit in the chair beside you?

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyover 13 years ago
Sweet moment.

the brevity added to the sweetness of this for me. one minor point - a purely personal preference - maybe break up the paragraphs a little?

a great read and a job well done all the same. xx

lakesailer_milakesailer_miover 13 years ago
Beautifl

You capture the emotion so well. Her desire, her longing...not simply just sex, but more. Yet, really hot too...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
First rate story!

Both romantic and arousing!

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