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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot but short

You had a lot of potential before you went off on a tangent about the mother and the principal and the 'night decision' thing...this could have been a series to be honest with you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Spellcheck doesn't guarantee you the right word.

It's principal, not principle. A principal is the top school administrator. A principle is a rule or code to go by. Also, you seem very down on men. Some of us do support our children and do not abuse or cheat on our wives.

Lokis_mindLokis_mindabout 13 years ago
Interesting

Enjoyable and different. Mind you i found the Julie/Jim shit annoying especially when it had two jims. Would of been more enjoyable without that. Made it difficult to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Julie/Jim?

Julie/Jim really annoyed me, if he wants to be known by a female name just use Julie, the 'technique' made the story frustrating to read

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