All Comments on 'Started with Panties'

...is it?

You had a reasonable story line (if you also like anal fingering). But the spelling mistakes and words out of context did distract from a good flow. I would suggest reading over your story several times before submitting and also seeking help from an editor. It doesn't matter what country you're from or what level of English you have attained, so don't take the comments from others to heart. Keep writing.

As previously commented this was a good story line but the poor spelling and even worse grammar just totally ruined the readability of this story.

Heck, I loved this!! Great job!

get an editor and do a rewrite and never ever post a story with out going through an editor this was so bad i couldn't even finish it because it gave me a head ache from trying to figure out what you wanted to say

bad writing and there is nothing erotic or sexy about master slave shit. do all readers a favor and DELETE THIS ATONCE.