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RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 15 years ago
Deliciously erotic

A well-written, short vignette. You have talent and I'd love to see you develop your characters and plot more fully. Nice start. I hope there's more to come.

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyabout 15 years ago
Nice visuals

Very good story, I loved the visuals. Would like to read more.

-Joe-

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