All Comments on 'Step By Step Ch. 02'

Excellent read, waiting for the next chapter with baited breath. Sanmacca.

very well thought out. didnt expect her to be a dom. one.

I was getting into this story until this clishe "Mistress" crap started. God damn is it getting old.

if you don't like my stories do what I did, write your own.

Too many are quick to criticize but offer no proof that they can do anywhere as well.

Really good, as always. Quibbles follow via "Sent Feedback". The technicals are weak, but the plot and characterizations are so good that ony techno-nerds like me even notice.

Funny how those that want to dis a story without giving any helpful advice are always called Anonymous. This is a wonderful story which i have read on another site. Oh for heavens sake this a wonderful author full stop.

I am enjoying the ride. I love the pace, the build up and Helen loosening up a little bit at a time. I am hooked.

Still gets me

This is getting to be a very hot story, can't wait to read more! Loving it.