All Comments on 'Step By Step Ch. 06'

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estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Really Fine Plotting, Characterization, Mise-en-Scene

Miss Lisa Jones, this was one hot, sweet, real collaring. Helen and Sam are a great pair, hot and sweet with just a certain dark tang, a bite. You serve a wicked cocktail. More! Of course, what would a great Miss Lisa Jones story, not to say one with a collaring party, be without quibbles from estragon? And those you shall have, via "Send Feedback". And thanks for the plug on your bio page. I have the best fun quibbling really fine stories by really fine writers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I am in love with this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

DryhillDryhillalmost 13 years ago
GREAT STORY

This is one of my all time favourite stories, having read it several times on another site. It is well portrayed with believeable characters in real situations.

liz33ndliz33ndover 8 years ago
Great story

Keep up the great work. Collaring would be great to witness.

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