All Comments on 'Steph's Descent Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The only thing Phil got used too?

Was never seeing her. Because he threw her out. What an idiotic story. It has no basis for their actions and the cardboard characters are spouting such inane dialogue that it's just silly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well I'm enjoying it

Stories don't all have to stand up to in-depth analysis so this one's fine by me.

Maybe Amanda could introduce Steph to nipple stretching - that way she could have vertical piercings and more at other angles (creating a star effect) as they gradually lengthened. The stretchers could even be padlocked on by the boys so Steph was forced to wear them 24x7! Then of course there's labia stretching....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I enjoyed chapter 1-2-3...

I'm done. That she loved her husband but was unhappy with their sex life, I can follow. That she was curious and wanted to explore her kinky side, no problem. Now the author wants us to follow this ridiculous joke... come on. This could have been such a good series.

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