All Comments on 'Steps to Licking Pussy Ch. 04'
by directorx
- 10 Comments
Anonymousover 14 years agoYou're a great writer! I love your stories that I have read so far! This series is amazing, it's really hot! Please write a chapter 5!
Anonymousover 14 years agoI am sitting here, half sliding off my chair! I agree, a chapter 5 would not go amiss!
GrrrreatImaginationabout 12 years agoI didn't leave comments on chapters 1, 2 or 3 because I wanted to keep reading. I like the interplay of romance with lust that you've created here. I think there should be a chapter 5, because we still haven't learned the part of the story that has Jennifer addicted to licking pussy (though we see she is on her way). Please bring this story home.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoIt's just sad that you seem to have stopped writing, seeing as of now it's been 4 years since your last story. Because this story really screams to be finished, it's so close!
This story manages to be both deep and short at the same time. Also - the idea that the girls still consider themselves straight - very arousing and you seem to play around with it in many of your stories.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoAgree with the comments from "Great Imagination". Not providing a resolution to this story leaves unanswered the motivation of the two participants who intentionally misled and manipulated the third. It also should reveal a retrospective analysis of how the two protagonists wound up feeling about what they'd done. There has been the suggestion of a happy ending for all concerned -- that's what I'd hope for. Before this could happen there needs to be a review and distillation of what had been the incessant nearly moment-by-moment rationalizations by the main narrator about what she was doing and thinking, and what she imagined the other women must be thinking, etc., etc., etc.
Let us call on "directorx" to come back to her readers with a wrap-up worth remembering and cherishing.
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