All Comments on 'Still More Tara'

Join the world in general and use its preferred spellings and meanigs for words, your stories will be better accepted. First off here are a coupe:

mum = remain quiet/sitlent

mummy = long dead body for science study

You really think that spreading egg mayo over any body part is sexy ...?

Yes a short story style that dives right in with enough scene setting too. Yes mayonaise or anything else an be sexy, for it's what is in our Minds that counts, not anyone ele's concepts or box...