All Comments on 'Stood Up'

I loved the story and couldn't stop till it ended. A+

One Suggestion, though.

Shouldn't this feedback section at the top of the page, as in soundbite reviews, Laurel?

P.S.

Laurel is the owner of Literotica along with that bloke Menu.

A great little story. Well-written and no diddling around, with just the right amount of seediness and a great little sting to it. Hudson's got a knack for writing lean, effortless prose that pulls you along and for creating a nice, gritty urban atmosphere. Adult in the best sense of the word.

---d.M.