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Anonymousover 11 years agoVocab
"Cleansing breath" - all breath is cleansing, in that you expel what your body needs to get rid of, not sure the phrase works in this context, certainly not used repetitively.
Dreamrealover 11 years agoGoing no where
Clipped and wooden dialogue. Barely a storyline. Need to stop while you are ahead.
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