by Winidou
And welcome to Literotica, Winidou. It is good to have a new writer with us and I enjoyed your début story. The only advice I can offer you is, now you have started, to keep writing -- every day if you can.
No-one, not even Stephen King or Neil Gaiman knows everything about writing; you must find your own voice and your own way. That is more than many of us could hope for.
Well done -- four stars.
The only complaint I have is I want to read more! Please keep the story going!!!
That was so good!!! Wish that would happen to me 😍 hoping there’s a part 2!