by billyjoe86
I enjoyed this and have cyber role played it with two guys and myself. I felt it a little lacking cuz u read about Jay cumming but not u. That would have completed this story nicely for me. Grammer needs to be reviewed too.
But only a start. There is so much more to be said. The descrition of Jay pulling out of the authors ass and into his mouth to blow his load is nicely erotic but this is a couple with much more to enjoy. I'm looking for several more chapters. Billyjoe is a promising writer.
Thanks guys for your comments. Really appricate that you like the story i will have to get another chapter to the saga
Straight men all enjoy man-to-man if the situation is right, so go for it and enjoy !
the story excited me as i had the famtacy to try that in real life. I never was so excited