All Comments on 'Stranger in the Dark'

Amanda...very nice submission. It went somewhere I did not expect, but the title was very appropriate. Come to think of it, it started unlike I thought it would in this category. Very good story! Even at the end there was more plot development. I hope you keep it up! I would like to learn more about Bray and her landlord, and even Mike, too. It could be interesting!

OMG!!!!! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!! PLEASE!!!! SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!! How is mike going to take the bad news? will she really talk to mike about breaking up?? will mike take his anger out on her?? what about mark???? so many questions!!!!