All Comments on 'Stranger on the Beach'

Perhaps my favorite story of all. She is perfect. She is my dream.

Hello from Greece! So romantic story! So sensual! However, no story actor did think of condom use? Sex play is nice! :)

Sincerely,

Elias Tsolis

I loved it!! Absolutely loved the details, all the imagery, incredible piece!!

Where is number 2 🙈 Straight 5stars I love great details we don't get lost...

I felt this story, I became the guy on the beach. This is one of the very best short erotica stories I've ever read. 5 stars

I enjoyed your story. Very detailed.

Anonymous; yes, pretty much. Horney47; thank you I plan on it. JWren; thank you for the critique, I like writing different, no name stories. You all make me smile, thank you for reading my little story.

Striking imagery and a stirring description of the full-bodied vision who appears in the moonlight. Passionate and mysterious, two elements which lift this above the run-of-the-mill tales of a sudden, unexpected seduction. No names but a wonderful roll in the sand with a teasing, hopeful finale.

What an erotic story. And very touching. Stuff that dreams are made of. Please keep writing.

Read both of your entries. You're a natural. RU sure you're straight ? Ummm !