by dweaver999
I absolutely love the Valerie stories and this is just a continuation of the great story telling I have come to expect in this series. Only one little thing, someone should proofread the story, there are several typos and small grammatical errors. Please keep up the great work!
This story is really great! It avoids focusing on the sex which is what so many BDSM stories do. I'm really interested to see how the 'movie' will turn out.
This looks like the start of another wonderful story. I look forward to the continuation!
I very much enjoyed this piece but the discussion of BDSM in the club seemed somewhat too clinical.
Great reading, as always. The timing of the events seems to be off, however. At the beginning of the chapter it says "6 months later" and then later on it says that Valerie's whipping occurred 4 weeks earlier.
As the saying goes, When all is said and done, more will have been said than done.