All Comments on 'Stray Prey Ch. 01'

Great start. I do hope you will continue with the story. I'd like to see where it goes.

Just for once I'd like to see a heroine who isn't annoying or stupid.

Please keep going. I'm not sure why the person below me thought the heroine was annoying and/or dumb. I personally enjoyed the Little Red Riding Hood symbolism. Now, I'm not sure if the first man (creature?) who caught her in the park was a big bad wolf or not, but the "stray" who chased him off is mighty fine.<br><br>

Please continue!

You have my attention. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors!

I loved the way you have sit the story up. Dark, scarey night, alone, in the woods, sounds, then the attack. Then saved, but not saved. Very ingenious.