All Comments on 'Strip Blackjack Leads to Threesome'

They are not the same!

You lost me completely when you said "loose" when you meant "lose." That tells me you're only semi-literate, and so I stopped reading. Get someone who knows the language better than you do to proofread before you post, please. You're the first to whom I've made this blunt a comment, but you won't be the last.

Proofreading is important, but come on...the story is great! The writing is hot and if that reader gets "lost" because he or she can't figure out the context, and keep enjoying the story, they have the problem.

Also, critical comments are fine, but how about a little tact!?! I think that is a MUCH more important quality in a person than whether they misspell a word or two. Get over it and enjoy this writer's content!

nice story, congrats

Had fun stroking my cock all the way through this story