by TxRad
Beautifully written, very explicit, and conveyed the emotions of all participants.
Great story! You had the range of ages and characters. These are believable characters. Those of us reading could imagine this happening. Keep up the good work.
I loved it. I lived in Texas and worked near Corpus as well and it made me laugh out loud a couple of times. Try reading it with a Texas twang, lol. I can't wait to read your next story.
Good characters that a reader could really see and appreciate.
Slow build up in the dart games to hot sex. Good humor, good characters, good sex. Everybody had a good time and so did this reader.