All Comments on 'Strip Evolution'

This is the first story I've read of yours after reading so many of your posts and I'm sorry to say that I'm disappointed in your skills as a writer. After reading how articulate you are on the forum boards and reading about all that you write about you being a published writer, I was expecting more.

Actually, your story was ordinary and your ability is average, which is why I could only give you a 3. Sorry.

I like humorous stories. This one didn't do it for me. Was spending to much time trying to figure out the game. I still gave you a four for effort. Best of luck to you in the contest.

DG

the gods rested. Except they weren't exactly gods, and they didn't actually rest as they were anything but tired. Your entanglement of the Creation with foreplay was very cute. I voted it a virmic.

but you write very well. I think I do not like the content so much tho. I would rather read a story and erotica.

I'm just wondering how Noah got the insider info on it all. A little bit of Bible knowledge goes a long way when understanding literature ... and the occasional Literotica satire, too. Good job, SR, even if some are clueless, and some are mean spirited.