All Comments on 'Stuck Up Neighbor'

by thanatos107

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CrissySnowCrissySnowabout 10 years ago

That crazy neighbor needs to come to my house

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 10 years ago
Slam dunk rape case

She reports the rape, the police collect the evidence (the sperm is perfect for DNA identification) talk to the neighbors, our boy won't convince them - not when they find the rope and duct tape - and away he goes. I wonder if his fellow inmates in the slammer will make a girl of him

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

H.H.Morant, stats show that more than not rapes go unreported. Might be the case here--which would be nice. Then he could do it again

happybetahappybetaalmost 10 years ago
good writing

The story was clear,concise, and easy to read. I enjoyed it (as a fantasy,of course. Haha) that ol'boy's sittin in the cat

bird seat,innit he? If he does'nt get carried away with it and get caught, he could have quasi steady pussy for the foreseeable future.

If I'd have thought that this read was a load of crap that needed to be flushed,I would'nt've read the whole thing. That's just me,tho.

thanatos107thanatos107almost 10 years agoAuthor
@happybeta

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback on prose. This is my first submission.

Obviously, this is total fantasy that did not occur in the real world. I now understand why most writers preface the non-consent stories explaining the element of fantasy, which I will do in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good Story.

Fantasy true enough, but still something many of us can relate to.

Cannot be acted out. Can be thought about.

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