All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 15'

cant wait for the next chapter!

Finish it already. Lovely reading but I want to know how it ends.

i cannot wait to read the next chapter to see what happens. The detail and emotions that you express for David and alanna are realisitic and stirring. i enjoy your writing very much whichever category i read.

I am so glad I haven't gotten a chance to read this series in a while. Its so hard reading a chapter, and not have another one waiting right behind it. I get three in a row this time! I'm loving this story, and actually I do like this one being drawn out a bit. It would be a shame for so sweet a love tale to end quickly.

We all knew that he loved her a long time ago, but now he does too.