by availableslave2u
...that I be the first to tell you how much I love this story. You know I am a fan of yours and that you know how to write about the lifestyle in a way that's more raw and real than fantasy.
I like the way we see Lynn's pain in here. The way that we see where she came from so to speak because too many times people focus on the actions themselves when it comes to the lifestyle than the reasoning behind them. You made Lynn into a flesh and blood person rather than a fantasy wank image.
I am hoping your Master can treat you as well as Lynn's get treated in this one. I hope you get the chance to write another story again because you truly are good at it.
This work shows such raw emotion, such power, such beauty. Thank you.
I have never had experience with a Dom/Sub relationship but thus well-written story goes far in providing an understanding of the attraction and rewards of this life style. Well done as2u and thanks for the education.