All Comments on 'Suburban Underbelly Ch. 04'

Dear Mr. Fastand sloppy

You said you had a wild imagination. You didn't say that you were addicted to understatement........I Loved every second of your story.....It is the best....I thought I could write......As good as I thought I was, I give up....At the moment I intend to quit writing and just wait around waiting to read your next effort. Probably I'll recant mt non-writing vow ()what else would I do in my spare time?).

Suburban Underbelly was great!!!!! My heart is still pounding as I breath deeply to calm myself.

With all my admiration (you have just redeemed Literotica as a site to visit),

I am

Sincerely

ILienBagby

Now just need the story of the road trip.

You are rediculous. This is rediculous. I ate it every word. "Ink runs from the corners of my mouth. There is no happiness like mine. I have been eating poetry"

dria.

This story was completely crazy. but ill give you that is was a great read all the same.

See above

... at the time of writing, I genuinely had trouble breathing from my snickering fits. Thanks a bunch - although my penis had trouble deciding between the "hotdamn" and the "I'll just hide away until all is over" states.

Man there needs to be a sequal

This was wonderful. It wasn't like anything else, in that I couldn't predict what would happen next, while simultaneously the sex was hot. There was a good amount of humor, but not so much that it derailed the story. I usually don't leave multi chapter stories wishing for more, but this so fast, funny, and hot, that it could have gone on for several more chapters. Well done!

I'm glad it ended on the upturn I was worried there for a while.

This ending was totally unexpected, but, you DID warn the readers of the craziness within. Well done.

So glad that you ended this

Great story. Excellent twists and turns. Would love to know what happens to our man and his girls down the line.

I can't find Part 3. What happened to it?

Where’s ch.3?

FYI: Literotica removed Chptr 3 because of a scene where a cat is sacrificed by a witch