All Comments on 'Suburbia Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Worst than the first part

The first part was rubbish this is just worse, please don't continue this. The only place for this is the bin!!!!!

DJHyrrikhayneDJHyrrikhayneover 19 years ago
To Anonymous...

Most people who don't like the first part of a story, usually don't even bother to read the second part... something must have brought you back...?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Dear Mr. Author - Re Comments Again

People who are truly good at what they do don't flaunt it -nor are they cute with their customers in their comments.

Suggest you move this to interracial and be nice not cute - it isn't a good style if you wish a following who respects you and your work. If not suffer the comments and continued disrespect as you will have earned it. Think about it eh.

Note: If you don't want to write interracial don't - if you do honor the catagory and have fun. Regards -

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Needs a few more chapters

Two unsatisfied neighbor housewives....maybe some babies need to be added to this neighborhood...

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