All Comments on 'Succubus'

by Strenoth

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mBrowmBrowabout 15 years ago
Excellent Story!

Well done, very erotic presentation. The writing, syntax, and grammar were well done, too, as I noticed no distracting homophones or other errors. Cheers! Thanks, Strenoth.

AJ_WatsonAJ_Watsonabout 15 years ago
Very good

Well written story. I love succubi stories so this was a real joy for me to read. Very erotic to see the guy's helpless seduction. Hope to see more stories from you!

jonmartin22jonmartin22about 15 years ago
fab!

brilliant topic and well written!

helldaemenhelldaemenalmost 13 years ago
Good Show!

Twas a good read. A little too much on the surrendering in my oppinion but still damn good .

When did succubi become vampires? XD

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