All Comments on 'Succubus Ch. 04'

I really like the story. It holds the attention and isn't your typical sex description.

The only complaint I have is your use of shutter. The word you are looking for is shudder. A shutter is a cover for a window. A shudder is a small rapid shake. Thank you. I got that out of my system.

Can't wait to read more

Thanks for pointing that out and you are absolutely correct. She definitely wasn't shuttering herself up, so to speak. While I did proofread the story myself numerous times, I couldn't find anyone else readily to edit it for me, and that slipped past me. It's amazing how the mind will filter out that sort of thing.

If I could edit the story now, I would. This sort of thing irks me.

Can't wait for another chapter :)

Write more stories and dont end it here. If possible get storys out faster it sucks waiting.

I like how in the beginning of the story he has 2 pair of boxer shorts on. One to throw in the sink, one to crumpled on the floor. ;) great story, keep writing!

I hope we don't have to wait for the next chapter as long as we did for this one. :)

hes an incubus lolz or something 500 hundred years miln found some staying power awesome story even if we hafta wait abit its awesome.

well-written, nice twist to the plot-great sex thanks

When are we gonna get another chapter? The story's great so far, but we want more! ;)

Please you have to finish!

Gonna finish? Guess not...

Hi all. The series is not dead yet. I am back and I am working on a new chapter in the ongoing sexcapades of Miln and Scott.

PLease keep it up. Thx

Scott's charter didn't seem real or likeably,for not being brave he took waking up to meet a succubus for the first time like it happens all the time plus there's not much of a plot and too much sex if that's the plot well from 1 to 10 I give it a 2