All Comments on 'Sucker Punch: Team Worked'

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KMB2476KMB2476over 10 years ago

In many significant ways, it's better than the actual movie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A Fucking Masterpiece

It's got great source material, it's well written and edited properly, and it's not 17 gorram pages. Fucking fantastic, seriously.

newtype2525newtype2525over 10 years ago
Incredible!

This is one of the hottest stories I have read in a very long time! Simply lust filled! Please say that there will be another branch to this story! Thank you and keep up the great works!

Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A Truly Unparallelled Work.

It so often ruins the story for me to have to wade through garbled spelling, nonsensical clauses, confused grammar, and a general lack of direction for the story, which then becomes bogged down in irrelevant details. A superb demonstration of structure, focus etc.; that and it was fucking inspired.

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