by Zev95
It's got great source material, it's well written and edited properly, and it's not 17 gorram pages. Fucking fantastic, seriously.
This is one of the hottest stories I have read in a very long time! Simply lust filled! Please say that there will be another branch to this story! Thank you and keep up the great works!
Cheers!
It so often ruins the story for me to have to wade through garbled spelling, nonsensical clauses, confused grammar, and a general lack of direction for the story, which then becomes bogged down in irrelevant details. A superb demonstration of structure, focus etc.; that and it was fucking inspired.