All Comments on 'Sugar and Spice Ch. 03'

Awesom!! More please !! Hope mandy and amber stay together.. I don't like that art teacher gabriel at all.. She seem use amber..don't make us wait!!

Ch. 4 is currently under construction. Will probably submit it later tonight. You will have it within three, four or five days. I'm so happy that everyone seems to have good things to say about my work.

Happy reading, everyone!

So much delicious drama going on. Well written but still needs fleshing out more. Come on girl, slow down and detail it more cause this story idea is really good.

Thanks for sharing.

IDB.

' I agree with idb about fleshing it out a bit but it is a Wonderful Story im so glad i just happen to come across it and decided to give it a crack :)

I really enjoy Mandy and her Love for Amber. I hope they end up

That was great

Or as Alice said in Wonderland, curiouser and curiouser. Mandy takes a pregnancy test and finds she's pregnant. Then lo and behold! later that evening she comes to full term and gives birth to a healthy daughter. You know, Kitten, you could turn into quite a reasonable writer if you weren't so bloody careless. So far, this story has developed into a series of implausibilities which make it very difficult to take your work seriously.