All Comments on 'Sugar Heart Ch. 04'

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erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 9 years ago
Adorable couple

Cute cute couple, I love your stories a lot and am looking forward to the happily ever after that is going to happen, these two deserve it after going through a lot of nasty in their still young lives. Way to go Tam.

ladymaryladymaryover 9 years ago
Lovely story

But it seems that you are trying to overcompensate for the fourth chapter of "Just a Game" (which I loved) by making this one too sugary. I like this story and Buddy is just adorable but everything is just too sweet too fast, in my opinion. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more!!!!!

Please give us another chapter! I want to see where it first from here. I love how sugar coated it because it makes it so sweet and loveable

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Would love to read more! I love these two, and the story line. Gold! Hope you update soon :)

jackfrost626jackfrost626over 9 years ago
pls more !!!!

I really , trully , love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Can't wait for more

This is such a sweet story. I'm eagerly anticipating the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

This story is amazing and the characters are absolutely perfect! Hope there will be a next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Loved it

Such an amazing story!!! <3

ilovegibbsilovegibbsabout 9 years ago
Fantastic story!

Omg! I was already a fan from reading Picture Perfect. I love, love, love that series so I decided to see what else you have written. I found Sugar Heart and I am touched again by how sweet and lovely and wonderful your stories are. Your talent is amazing. You make me love your characters. You draw me into their lives. I laugh, I cry, I love and I want just like them. Please continue this series?? Please? I really would love to see how life treats these two beautiful men as they start a life together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

I love this story you should denately write more so toughing and adorable please more chapters for sugaheart

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

So sweet and hot!

dnsontndnsontnalmost 3 years ago

More tears from me. Beautifully crafted

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Keeping the "lit" in Literotica. Turnoffs: -Clichés -Flat, one-dimensional characters -Misspelling "prostate" as "prostrate" Yes, I have a stick up my behind about writing mechanics, but since when is it a bad thing to have something up your behind? (Wink...)

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