by BlueTurnSignal
Yes, great start. Big strong dominant man, giving the muscled butt a firm swat to move him along, and make him feel his place...good future possibilities.
LOL, it's going to be a long summer from the sounds of it! Can't wait to see what's happens next.
A story is always great when it has a older man dominating a younger one. Can wait till the next chapter.
I used to like older guys but now since I'm older I prefer younger, longer lasting, loaded young guys.... Can't wait until it begins to get Hot, Wet and sticky!~~~
Waiting for the next chapter is like torture, get on with it already you tease.
i stopped reading after the 10 inch cock part...nothing worse that COMPLETELY unbelievable stories
It's a dumb mistake, to give the boy a 10 inch cock. Make it 7 inches, then we're with you. Ten inches, and you're over-compensating for something.
Come On! Ten inches is Hot. He was obviously trying to make the Character seem manly! A girly Main character doesn't make for a good Story.
Excellent job Anonymous 6/13 with your repartee! Have none of you recently taken an older 18-22 year male relative to buy shoes or to a water amusement park? You can park a Miata in their shoes and the rest... please don't embarass yourselves undressed to the younger hung lads. Good beginning for a summer story.
I have a kink for voyeurism and humiliation. I can sense this story has a lot of potential. Looking forward to seeing how it will continue.
I can really get into this! I'm hoping the older guy will find more ways to keep the other one naked. Really appreciated that booty slap BTW.
VERY Hot!!!
Sexy, hung eighteen year old stud, completely naked outdoors, wet, vulnerable, and under the control of a hot commanding older guy. Very enjoyable read. Takes me back to one of my first CMNM experiences.