All Comments on 'Summer Business'

She was seducing him from the time they met. Slowly, almost unconsciously at first. Then playfully, probably without any intention of it going very far. Then finally with the need she was feeling. I was glad her husband gave his permission. It made the result OK and much more enjoyable. Nice sex scene, erotic without getting stupid.

Perfectly paced and well-written short story.

Thanks for doing it right.

Well written, good lead in to the culminating sex. Great example proving once more the brain is the primary sex organ. What an outstanding first post. Love to see more. Kalodin

Great story, one of the best I've read and enjoyed in a long time. There must be more.

The story has many additional possibilities. This was a good place to end chapter 1. You could do alot worse by starting chapter 2. Just a thought.