All Comments on 'Summer Camping Ch. 01'

The characters were real, the asides added a lot...

Dribbled in description as it was needed (so to speak). Nice touch there.

Add a shot of exhibitionism and a jigger of voyeurism – and some good clean sex – and you wrote a winning combination.

Well done.

Because I can not even imagine that a group to early 20 year old guys would get all excited and be rude over seeing a naked 29 year old hide with her husband. Now if she had been 20 and single or with other young girls then maybe.