All Comments on 'Summer Fun'

by kdanilove

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good, but...

nice story but needs a bit of editing.

girlslikethis84girlslikethis84over 11 years ago
mmmmmmmmm

this was so hot and sexy and total turn on wish i coulda joined in :)

Vlad2010Vlad2010over 11 years ago
Series?

Nice story. You could make a good series from this start. You might want to consider an editor to catch the typos and grammar.

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