All Comments on 'Summer Heat'

I liked it..keep going.

done for a first try. Keep it up. Would love to see another chapter.

Wonderful use of English, wonderful story telling, a little jewel of a piece. I don't normally like stories which are as all action as this (and I think some more character development might help the piece, particularly if you plan a 'chapter two') but the quality of this writing is transcendent. Brilliant. Keep it up.

i was hooked word for word. very nice start, i do hope to see much more. it was well written and flowed beautifully. please continue

A well told, most excellent story, however the romantic in me believes you quit too soon. Anyway, Thank you. Ronnie W.

don't quit the story put more ch. 02 thanks cfh

so good! must have more!: )

... so almost something other - which might have spoiled a brilliantly told tale.

No - leave it there. Tell us a different story, next.

As with your other stories, I truly enjoyed *cough* it. Please keep up the good work, and feel free to take things further, either with a second chapter to one of the 3 already written, or in an entirely new storyline. Well done, 'kid'

This story was perfection. I do hope there is more to it. I just loved it. The words flowed so smoothly, the characters were portrayed so fully. I really would love to see this continued. great job!

is there another one?

You a clearly a talented writer,

but some editing needed for misspellings, etc.

Keep it up--

enjoyed the read.