All Comments on 'Summer Heat'

You a clearly a talented writer,

but some editing needed for misspellings, etc.

Keep it up--

enjoyed the read.

is there another one?

This story was perfection. I do hope there is more to it. I just loved it. The words flowed so smoothly, the characters were portrayed so fully. I really would love to see this continued. great job!

As with your other stories, I truly enjoyed *cough* it. Please keep up the good work, and feel free to take things further, either with a second chapter to one of the 3 already written, or in an entirely new storyline. Well done, 'kid'

... so almost something other - which might have spoiled a brilliantly told tale.

No - leave it there. Tell us a different story, next.

so good! must have more!: )

don't quit the story put more ch. 02 thanks cfh

A well told, most excellent story, however the romantic in me believes you quit too soon. Anyway, Thank you. Ronnie W.

i was hooked word for word. very nice start, i do hope to see much more. it was well written and flowed beautifully. please continue

Wonderful use of English, wonderful story telling, a little jewel of a piece. I don't normally like stories which are as all action as this (and I think some more character development might help the piece, particularly if you plan a 'chapter two') but the quality of this writing is transcendent. Brilliant. Keep it up.

done for a first try. Keep it up. Would love to see another chapter.

I liked it..keep going.