by DreamerOne
That was an amazing start and I really enjoyed your story. Please continue!
loved it. please do a sequel but then please do them for your other stories too :)
I love your stories, especially the ones with supernaturals. I look forward to reading more of your stories (new or sequels). Keep it up, please!
Really great story! Would love to have more with these characters if you can.
sorry. great story.
but.. it's just that... wolves don't bark.
It is actually more of a yip and only done in play or when young but wolves do bark though howling is the more common form of communication! And this story just ROCKED!!
The last commenter was very right, wolves do bark. They also have a bark like growl that they give their cubs during times of lesson giving. I raised and breeded wolves for a long perioud of time both timber and black wolves. Amazingly enough by chance some of my beloved 'pack' members ended up in the wolf relocation program for Yellowstone and Yosemite Parks. I miss them with everything within me. However, my sad heart is eased beacuse I know that their children, grandchildren, great-grand children, and so on have thrived and will continue to thrive beautifully.
~EnchantedGreen~
I really love this story...it came together nicely. I love that Jamie accepted David even after David changed. I think there should be at least another chapter...PLEASE! I bet you have it in you to write another...maybe let it be that Jamie gets bitten by David and then becomes a wolf, too. That would be so cool.
I'm gonna beat craig's ass for what he did to Jamie . I loved the story though!! Write more!
I thought the story went a little too fast; it would have been nice to read more about their relationship during it's developping stages.
HOWEVER! That last paragraph made up for just about EVERYTHING that I didn't like so much. I still smile as I think about it. ^^
Overall this was a great story and I had lots of fun reading it. Nice job. =D
Nommater how many wolves stories i read i fall in love with them all.i think im in love with this story.where was i wen this story was posted.lovely