All Comments on 'Summer Moon'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great Story!

That was an amazing start and I really enjoyed your story. Please continue!

PiaraqPiaraqalmost 15 years ago
more please

loved it. please do a sequel but then please do them for your other stories too :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More please!

I love your stories, especially the ones with supernaturals. I look forward to reading more of your stories (new or sequels). Keep it up, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Would love to read more

Really great story! Would love to have more with these characters if you can.

deanahiideanahiiover 14 years ago
lovely

a fully unexpected story that i loved. thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

perfect. i loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
just one technicality

sorry. great story.

but.. it's just that... wolves don't bark.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wolves DO bark!!

It is actually more of a yip and only done in play or when young but wolves do bark though howling is the more common form of communication! And this story just ROCKED!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Raised/Breeded Wolves

The last commenter was very right, wolves do bark. They also have a bark like growl that they give their cubs during times of lesson giving. I raised and breeded wolves for a long perioud of time both timber and black wolves. Amazingly enough by chance some of my beloved 'pack' members ended up in the wolf relocation program for Yellowstone and Yosemite Parks. I miss them with everything within me. However, my sad heart is eased beacuse I know that their children, grandchildren, great-grand children, and so on have thrived and will continue to thrive beautifully.

~EnchantedGreen~

4catsrmine4catsrmineabout 12 years ago

I really love this story...it came together nicely. I love that Jamie accepted David even after David changed. I think there should be at least another chapter...PLEASE! I bet you have it in you to write another...maybe let it be that Jamie gets bitten by David and then becomes a wolf, too. That would be so cool.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
What the fuck Craig

I'm gonna beat craig's ass for what he did to Jamie . I loved the story though!! Write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A little fast...

I thought the story went a little too fast; it would have been nice to read more about their relationship during it's developping stages.

HOWEVER! That last paragraph made up for just about EVERYTHING that I didn't like so much. I still smile as I think about it. ^^

Overall this was a great story and I had lots of fun reading it. Nice job. =D

LifoLifoabout 11 years ago

Nommater how many wolves stories i read i fall in love with them all.i think im in love with this story.where was i wen this story was posted.lovely

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
That last line...

Had me laughing my face off.

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