All Comments on 'Summer Moon Ch. 02'

Great to see a bit more from David & Jamie! Will there be any more while Jamie's at college?? [HINT HINT] Good work again ;)

Loved it, sweet and full of suspense, can't wait to read more of your stuff.

I loved it. Jamie and David was so cute...

Theres gotta be more. plz dont end this just yet. i loved this. its like a romantic horror flick. amazin. and u shouldnt just cut out unless ur puttin more. u have to put more.

Keep going don't stop I succumbed to this story in the first chapter on the first page. Jamie is Bella/Beauty and David is Jacob/Beast and this is the story if Bella picked Jacob and Edward got jealous. Keep writing until there's nothing to write about. LOVE YOU!

I was amazed by your stories. When I read the first Z. Brite refrence and then Night wish and then Type O Negative I thought, he wants me to have his babies lol. Lost Souls changed my world (it and Drawing blood were based in my home state N.C.), it made me fall in love with reading again. I don't know if you read it but I see a lot of Nothing in some of your charecters. That may be me. Ghost is my personal inspiration, his hair... anyways back to you. I pray you continue. I've come across some truely inspirational writers on this page and you are surely a top five in the fav cat. When I finally get around to making a profile here I'll make it known to the world. Exert: Lost Souls, Popye Z. Brite- When you have too much faith in something it is bound to hurt you. Too much faith in anything will suck you dry, in that way the world is a vampire.

I think I may have reported the story. I was trying to move down to hitfor next page but hit that instead. I think i got out of it by immediately moving pages but not sure.. This is a great story so hopefully nothing came of my stupidity! I should not rush next time.

You are among those talented writers here on Literotica that keep coming up with beautiful stories which are both emotionally engaging and very entertaining.

you could take this a lot further if you wanted to. I love your writing and story lines, I would love for Jamie to be turned too, so that they could be with each other for life. Infact you could have had a lot of fun writing about when Jamie was in college. Just a suggestion my friend. Thanks for great writing. Keep up the good work. Simon x

agree was needed

His mother sounds as bad as mine...if you add screeching, demon harpy to the description.

would love to read more of their story