All Comments on 'Summer Rain'

This was superbly written....it reminded me of my first time.....was almost exactly the same as the story. Very descriptive, like one was right there watching!!

it was good but way to short

"She rested her legs on either side of Richard, and kneeled there like a frog "

Maybe, it is erotic for you somehow,

but frogs squatting in the rain just don't do it for me.