All Comments on 'Sunday at Annie's Ch. 02'

I loved the teasing, the slow build up and thought the detailed descriptions in the sexual vignettes were very well-done. Great storyline. Please write more . . . and more . . . and more!

Great story. Im really enjoying the intensity of their relationship. It's scary and beautiful. I hope the next chapter leaves me even more satisfied.

...there should be more energetic, filthy talk while they're playing. More description of their cunts would make it hotter. Shaved? Tight? Wet? Sweet juice flowing from them? How hard are their nipples?

Best of luck.

Anna in Los Altos