All Comments on 'Sunday Love Songs 01'

Intriguing well-written tale of lovers that seem to move apart rather than together. Continue this story.

I gave up on the second page, just no connection between the characters.

Wow, what a first class bi...I mean confused soul. The fact that your story incites this much emotion is a testament to your expressive writing.

Please, do continue.

Real characters! Ooh!

I'm totally waiting to see what happens next!

As 'anonymous' said, it was a bit heavy early on. However it is a solid story and well written. Am looking forward to a continuation. Thanks for the tale.

Please finish this . you cannot let this hang !!

I need an ending asap lol!

Simply Brilliant story

I have enjoyed reading Chapter 1 and am looking forward to the rest. Thank you for sharing.

I loved it. No real criticism or suggestions.

Keep writing, I nearly through all your stuff

Chilley

Great story. Strange that there are so few comments. On to ch2 now. *****

to the point of being painful.

On one hand I wish he would give up and move on

yet, on the other . . . .

Your absorbing stories get into peoples real lives. If had not seen there was in fact a second part to this story, believe your readers would be coming for you. Bravos.

I can't stand any more misunderstandings and crap. this woman and her roomate must be two of the dumbest bitches ever.