by Alwaysraining
I can't stand any more misunderstandings and crap. this woman and her roomate must be two of the dumbest bitches ever.
Your absorbing stories get into peoples real lives. If had not seen there was in fact a second part to this story, believe your readers would be coming for you. Bravos.
to the point of being painful.
On one hand I wish he would give up and move on
yet, on the other . . . .
Great story. Strange that there are so few comments. On to ch2 now. *****
I loved it. No real criticism or suggestions.
Keep writing, I nearly through all your stuff
Chilley
I have enjoyed reading Chapter 1 and am looking forward to the rest. Thank you for sharing.
Simply Brilliant story
As 'anonymous' said, it was a bit heavy early on. However it is a solid story and well written. Am looking forward to a continuation. Thanks for the tale.
Real characters! Ooh!
I'm totally waiting to see what happens next!
Wow, what a first class bi...I mean confused soul. The fact that your story incites this much emotion is a testament to your expressive writing.
Please, do continue.
Intriguing well-written tale of lovers that seem to move apart rather than together. Continue this story.