All Comments on 'Sunday Love Songs 01'

by Alwaysraining

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
fucking hell

I can't stand any more misunderstandings and crap. this woman and her roomate must be two of the dumbest bitches ever.

Horseman68Horseman68about 5 years ago
Great - As Expected.

Your absorbing stories get into peoples real lives. If had not seen there was in fact a second part to this story, believe your readers would be coming for you. Bravos.

rightbankrightbankalmost 8 years ago
unrequited

to the point of being painful.

On one hand I wish he would give up and move on

yet, on the other . . . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great

Great story. Strange that there are so few comments. On to ch2 now. *****

chilleywilleychilleywilleyover 10 years ago
What a great writer you are

I loved it. No real criticism or suggestions.

Keep writing, I nearly through all your stuff

Chilley

Sid0604Sid0604over 10 years ago
This is great...

I have enjoyed reading Chapter 1 and am looking forward to the rest. Thank you for sharing.

RePhilRePhilover 10 years ago
Just need a Beer run back in a minute for the next chapter

Simply Brilliant story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I need the ending ASAP!

I need an ending asap lol!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
loved this

Please finish this . you cannot let this hang !!

CallMeABritCallMeABritover 10 years ago
Yes, do continue

As 'anonymous' said, it was a bit heavy early on. However it is a solid story and well written. Am looking forward to a continuation. Thanks for the tale.

TooCleverByHalfTooCleverByHalfover 10 years ago
WOW

Real characters! Ooh!

I'm totally waiting to see what happens next!

hopelessly_otakuhopelessly_otakuover 10 years ago
Expertly written

Wow, what a first class bi...I mean confused soul. The fact that your story incites this much emotion is a testament to your expressive writing.

Please, do continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I gave up on the second page, just no connection between the characters.

Big BuddyBig Buddyover 10 years ago
Intriguing

Intriguing well-written tale of lovers that seem to move apart rather than together. Continue this story.

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I live the the North West of England, where we get more than our share of rain, hence my pen-name. Before I retired, more years ago than I care to think about, I had a job which exercised my mind to the full. I never had time to write anything but text books and manuals. Si...

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