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by masterfeedlarry

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delidumruldelidumrulover 14 years ago
good

i like to read cheating wife stories but i like it feeling to be in and to watch the whole occurence. i expected them to let you get in the suite B so after you left the floor i disappointed. but friend, it's ok. i'm waiting for the rest, don't forget to continue:).

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Don't Talk In "Stupid" Language

"And I'm even more in love with you now that I know this turns you on too." is not love, its pure LUST and nothing more than that.

WargamerWargamerover 2 years ago

This was a regurgitation of the previous chapter that really took us nowhere in the story.

Scores like this story 1/5 for wasting my time.

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Creative writing major in college. Made a career as a history teacher. My high school English teacher once told me that, should I ever encounter writer's block, try writing a pornographic scene. She said "a love scene," but I knew what she meant.

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