All Comments on 'Supermarket Sex Games'

Very well written and entertaining story with excellent characterization and descriptive ability. The humor, while sparse, is an added benefit too.

On the downside, the dialogue is a bit too direct for such new acquaintences but that doesn't distract the reader much from the story line, and the pace may be a little too fast, too hectic, for some readers.

All in all, a very good story!