All Comments on 'Supporting Our Veterans'

just another CUCK wimp writer, like there isn't too many on this site already!

Just no.

OK, Were do we go from here?

Stop it here before you turn the story into a pile of shit.

Do we really want yet more cucky crap on here?? Personally I am sick of it.

if you do all that will happen is the dumb ass will let his wifew screw everyone in the US Armed Forces or any country's military service and get divorced. Unless she just never comes home from her first date. So there is no story here.

A. Fuck the haters.

B. We're not here to be the creator of your story. It's not horribly written but it needs to be your story. Tell it the way you see it.

She should fuck Bob and her husband should watch

I bet you are proud of your self. Just think... no.12568.

Great number, I think it is your number.

12568 cuck writers... and counting!

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Always fascinating to see the posters who whine on and on about "cucky shit", but are still reading it. I guess you see yourselves as self appointed censors on an erotic story site, which is rather strange. This story can be finished in two ways. One, the wife flirts, goes to the edge of sex with another man, but stops and is that kind of loving wife. Or, two, she takes it all the way and is still written as a loving wife, rather than as a ball busting shrew that you sometimes see portrayed. Authors choice, but so far pretty well written.

Our veterans deserve every possible kindness.

They spend all day whacking off to porn then whine about the stories they beat off to.

Finish the story, if you want. People will bash you and your stories, because they try to intimidate writers who write on topic for this category.

..so far, except I refuse to be manipulated into begging an author to continue. Either publish or be damned.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

It's an opening paragraph. Never continue.

Please do continue story...so far very intriguing

Please continue, my wife & I really enjoyed it.

Write what you like and don’t worry about those who come here to read stories, then complain and call the writers perverts. I'm surprised they can type with just one hand on the keyboard and the other on their cock!

So far I’m enjoying your story. It actually reminds me of a friend we have. He too is a Viet Nam vet in his 70’s (I’m 66 and was a Viet Nam era vet). When my wife Cee and I get together with him and his wife, we all hug “Hello” and “Good Bye’. But Cee’s hug (giving and receiving) always lasts a little longer than it probably should. Cee denies it, but I laugh knowing she is BS’n.

Great start.

yes tell us the rest please my first wife and second wife were 7 yrs younger than me and i love sharing her with my friends and she brought her married female friends over for me to fuck with her there and share and sometimes not and we loved swinging

The title arises a question: Supporting veterans is plural form, so will she fuck just Bob, or will fuck all of them as soon as Bob opens his mouth to all the other veterans? 1*

You do a fine job. Watch about becoming too predictable. She could fool a bit with Bob and then Bob arranges her to strip for the VFW, something like that.

So many people give lip service to veterans, few actually do more than clap during a parade. As a veteran, I \want this to continue. It's never happened for me, write a second chapter.

So, you have a choice of ignoring the people who comment on the story or ignoring the "person" who says to ignore those who dare have a different opinion.

If you don't know whether or not to continue your own story, don't bother.

As noted, don't worry about demand for it or not, just bust a move if the story is in you.

The question is, do I think you should continue a story about an uncouth lout who imagines that because he's done his duty by his country he's entitled to grab decent women by the cunt and maul them? I guess that's a no.

You think its erotic or exciting to portray a veteran as a gauche lout who has no manners or sense of decency? You do know what you claimed the vet did to the woman is a criminal act, on top of the indecency.

Why would you want to write such trash about the people who protect our country so you can write such trash? What a great show of gratitude.

A happily married hot 44 year old that want to fuck a 70 year old horn dog . Why and even more importantly why would her dumb hubby want her to. That 70 year old is telling every old vet he knows how he played with her pussy where any one could see. Not only will she be know as a loose pig but they are all going to give it a try . Two happily married caring people who do good things and volunteer will only be thought of as the dumb husband and the horny pig wife. What a shame , hope their kids never find out. I remember a friend of a friend when he found out his parents were divorcing because his mother was cheating all the time . It devestated him and on top of that his older sister had a rep for being a pig also. Alway felt bad for him

You can have the husband bring him home and then the two of them seduce the wife, she come strip off his clothes, revealing his massive hard on for her to sit down on while the hubby suggests that he guide the new cock into her pussy. Anyway love it

Yes please continue. As a 71 yo veteran, and perfectly capable of bringing a female to multiple orgasms, I would love to read about the wife bringing pleasure to Bob,,,and her husband.

yes please continue. ignore he nay sayers let them go elsewhere for their reading. I think it is a very erotic idea and the couple are good people to want to please and reward an older vet who would never other wise have a chance at a young attrative women again

the one from the idiot who pompously asserts that what he "... did to the woman is a criminal act, on top of the indecency."

Oh, man! That's hilarious.

Enjoyed the first one, now on to the rest.

Thanks for posting!

I will say this, we damn sure didn't get a welcome hove from our country or our population, in fact, a lot of guys came home to stick, stones,spit and curses and didnt even get a parade after the war was over.

Most of you people haven't got a fukkin clue about even our recent history. My former wife was a nurse. I doubt that even less of the clueless have ever read book called "Johnny got his gun" . I asked her what she would do if she was a nurse in those circumstances. She personally was ambivalent but did say that it would be a violation of protocol. Conversely, I know several masseuses who think in their Holistuc approach have no problem giving a massage with a happy ending if requested, male or female. In the late 19th century, during the Victorian era thru the beginning of the Edwardian era, women were treated for hysteria or other names by showing up at their Physician's office to get fingrr fucked.

And as an aside, a vet or even any guy, if he can cop a feel at that age, what's he got to lose, or even care? VN guys for the most part and at this age don't give a fuck and have had anger problems ever since..guess when? And our trusty leader him self saud "Grab 'em by the pyssy". So what's your problem? You abunch of moralizing hypocrites.

Do go on. Dying to read the comments. Better than dying for nothing in VN.

Congratulations. You have an excellent premise and the start of an interesting and exciting story. You have an interesting narrative style and a command of the English language.

you should definitely continue with this story,

I like the slow build. This is realistic. This is how it starts, with an incident that allows a couple to think about exploring something different, if they are both open-minded about it. Interesting that she was the one that first brought up the idea of fucking the old veteran. He’s being careful, not pushing her into anything, just laying the groundwork, setting up a situation to see what happens. We know he wants it: he got a hard-on, listening to her talk about how the old guy man-handled her, and the fact that neither of them did anything about it. So he knows she wants it and will submit to the old guy, a real turn-on for him, lucky guy, as he will not have to talk her into anything, like some husbands. He knows he’s got a keeper that he can share with others.

This is sort of what happened with us: a neighbor making insinuations about our sex life and us not saying anything, and ultimately feeling forced to admit he was turning us on, then inviting himself into our bedroom, whereupon we realized that we are both more submissive than we thought, and got excited, being taken in hand by him. I can come, just thinking about how thrilling that first time was. I hope this guy gets to experience what we did, sharing his wife. A third party can lead you to exciting places.