All Comments on 'Surprise'

n/t

I like the story so far, but don't ignore details: you said the handcuffs attached her to the corners of the bed. If so, they would not be untied.

That about covers it.

You did a good job of putting together a believable story. The way you wrote the man's words, spaced out when he's talking, was somehow perfection. I did notice some errors as I read through, and a good editor will help with those, but there weren't so many that it hindered my reading. Keep writing :)