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My brother had confined ---- chance-meeting ---- mother was exited

could have easily fall ----- it when you will grow up, ---- cock in to my ----

playing cricket match

The stuff above is but a sample. These things spoil a good story You need to improve in both grammar and usage.An editor may help

best wishes

could use a little grammatical help

finished a bit fast too. it was too easy for both. A nice attempt. I liked reading it.